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April 13, 2007

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Curt

I used to work for a painting company. This is exactly what I told the owners.

Told them to develop a USP and advertise that... but they wouldn't listen. They wrote their display ad by copying all the other ads.

And they wonder why they just float along with everyone else... making very little money. Oh well. I tried.

Curt.

Joseph Ratliff

Ryan,

I like this concept in your blog. Please, expand on it. Identifying business genre's for copywriters is a good topic everytime.

On to the painters...

A personal example from my own business.

I wrote a simple, one-page flyer for a painting company locally. They converted it into a door hanger and hung it in a known area for rental houses (which always need paint). They also did a small mailer to 100 landlords.

Doubled their month to month business.

Not because of my copy mind you, but because we identified a U.S.P. and integrated it into both pieces.

Wow.

The scary thing is, at least 60 - 75% of small businesses out there are in exactly the same position.

Exactly the same position, no U.S.P., no targeted market or marketing...

Nice post Ryan.

Joseph Ratliff
Author of The Profitable Business Edge located at http://profitablebusinessedge.blogspot.com

Andre Bell

A client of mine I pursued suffered the same problems.

Quality, number of years in business, drug-free employees, yada yada yada... all the stuff anyone can claim.

So after interviewing the owner I came up with an idea for a flyer to replace what they were trying and failing at.

The before and afters are on a few of my sites. One is at http://www.andrebell.com/client_request/

Here's the kicker though... after getting an immediate emotional response from the owner after showing her what I came up with, she decided to go back to doing things as 'every other painter' is doing. Arghhhh!

So I decided to give her the boot.

The do-as-everyone-else mentality is one I will never understand.

Thanks for the memory :-)

Andre

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